x_los (
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2022-01-29 11:07 pm (UTC)
Re: 3.15
“Willow eyelids and plum-tree cheeks” ?
Hairpins keep getting dislodged in these
The beginning of stanza 1 sets me up to read line 4 as lightly romantic, and then the final line and next stanza spin that into a juxtaposition between the character and their surroundings.
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Re: 3.15
Hairpins keep getting dislodged in these
The beginning of stanza 1 sets me up to read line 4 as lightly romantic, and then the final line and next stanza spin that into a juxtaposition between the character and their surroundings.