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x_los ([personal profile] x_los) wrote in [community profile] dankodes 2022-04-19 09:49 pm (UTC)

Footnote 1 is a mess of commas

“carved railings ingeniously protect” how so?

“mocks the moon” ? Just because they’re potentially more beautiful?

“Lord of the East” him again!

“Who can prolong their fragrant dust?” ? so like, who can make them last, but why dust? Is that--pollen?

End is a bit confusing

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