Very annoying when the first line is a variant and so it's hard to find on Baike!

The standard first line is more like "Warm rain and clear wind"

Willow eyelids are glossed as: young willow leaves have the appearance of slender eyes, thus, willow eyes. (I'd really tl it to willow eyes instead.)

Plum tree cheeks are glossed as: plum blossom petals are like the cheeks of beautiful women, thus, plum flower cheeks. (Tree seems an odd tl choice.)

Mound-pillow is glossed as: sandalwood pillow. Because the shape is like 凹, it was called a mountain pillow