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x_los ([personal profile] x_los) wrote in [community profile] dankodes2021-11-26 02:04 pm

Nineteen Ways of Looking at Wang Wei, Week 2 of 2

This week, we're finishing Eliot Weinberger's "Nineteen Ways of Looking at Wang Wei". This short book discusses many ways to translate a single, brief Tang dynasty poem and the choices involved therein. This week, we'll look at the last ten poems. 

I'll reproduce the translations under discussion here, but c/ping from the pdf is not very reliable and frequently introduces errors. I'm including the text here primarily as a reference point for our discussions: I advise you to look at the book file itself for your reading.
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Re: 11. Deep in the Mountain Wilderness

[personal profile] forestofglory 2021-11-26 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
His praise for this poem as being like "what Wang would have written if he had been born a 20th century American" feels out of place to me. Classical Chinese for Everyone talks about this as one extreme of translation philosophy, with word for word translation-ese as the other extreme