I could do with more info about where these translations appear, the purposes and audiences they’re trying to serve—are any of them attempting, even, to be THE Deer Park in English, or a Deer Park in English, to specific ends?
They don’t note it, but this one has their ‘enter’ and their singular ‘shine’, which their earlier commentary seemed to express a preference for
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Re: 9. The Deer Enclosure
Date: 2021-11-15 04:05 pm (UTC)They don’t note it, but this one has their ‘enter’ and their singular ‘shine’, which their earlier commentary seemed to express a preference for