- one day in the new body and you are seeking out trouble. ONE DAY!
- the decision to translate 跳大神 as 'voodoo dance' is not good. They're not pros, so I don't hold them to that standard, and I'm sure it's just a moment of thoughtlessness, but it's misleading and accidentally racist
- I know why, but why do people not use Sha Hualing more in fics?? it's ALWAYS Mobei Jun: A Man. her fucking Exasperated Employee Energy. how gay she is about Liu Mingyan. I just don't see her as like, someone LBH ever speaks to in fic? and why not when arguably they hang more than he does with Mobei?
- ONE DAY in his new body SQQ baaaaaaarely managed to avoid another bondage scene with LBH, which might well have outed him, in a 'huh I've had this exact boner before--' sort of way
- "Shen Qingqiu was a little moved. Other than his bleeding heart of a Zhangmen-shixiong, he’d never expected to find someone else willing to use the phrase “noble and unsullied moral character” on him. Who’d know that right after, the storyline would take a nosedive. Full of emotion, Lu Liu said, “Who could have predicted that after being rejected, Luo Binghe, in the grip of despair, would be overtaken by wicked thoughts, even losing his mind and becoming abominable: out of lust, he tried to force Shen Qingqiu to submit!”
Shen Qingqiu dug his fingers into his head of messy hair, burying his head in his hands.
Yang Yixuan was already speechless: the gates of a whole new world had just been opened for this young man, assaulting him with new perspectives. Liu Mingyan, on the other hand, just let out a soft “ah.”
She said seriously, “So that’s how it was.”"
RL cackling Liu Mingyan you star you saving grace of the Liu family
- SQQ: it's ridiculous, bc who wouldn't happily sleep with Binghe? no one on earth, that's who. ...what? WHAT? I mean even As A Straight Man, I can see that--WHY ARE YOU BOOING ME?!?
- "As the tumbled around, locked in combat, the loose clothes on that body slipped completely down to its waist, and Luo Binghe’s palm directly pressed against that fair skin. With bloodshot eyes, Liu Qingge said, “Beast, no matter what he’s still your Shizun!”
Luo Binghe calmly said, “You think I’d do this with an outsider?”"
Ahahahah he's the worsttttt
- The pacing of 50 is still WILD fast, and I'm not sure whether it's a translation issue or what. This could stand to breathe more.
Re: Chapters 46-50
Date: 2021-02-05 10:46 pm (UTC)- the decision to translate 跳大神 as 'voodoo dance' is not good. They're not pros, so I don't hold them to that standard, and I'm sure it's just a moment of thoughtlessness, but it's misleading and accidentally racist
- I know why, but why do people not use Sha Hualing more in fics?? it's ALWAYS Mobei Jun: A Man. her fucking Exasperated Employee Energy. how gay she is about Liu Mingyan. I just don't see her as like, someone LBH ever speaks to in fic? and why not when arguably they hang more than he does with Mobei?
- ONE DAY in his new body SQQ baaaaaaarely managed to avoid another bondage scene with LBH, which might well have outed him, in a 'huh I've had this exact boner before--' sort of way
- "Shen Qingqiu was a little moved. Other than his bleeding heart of a Zhangmen-shixiong, he’d never expected to find someone else willing to use the phrase “noble and unsullied moral character” on him. Who’d know that right after, the storyline would take a nosedive. Full of emotion, Lu Liu said, “Who could have predicted that after being rejected, Luo Binghe, in the grip of despair, would be overtaken by wicked thoughts, even losing his mind and becoming abominable: out of lust, he tried to force Shen Qingqiu to submit!”
Shen Qingqiu dug his fingers into his head of messy hair, burying his head in his hands.
Yang Yixuan was already speechless: the gates of a whole new world had just been opened for this young man, assaulting him with new perspectives. Liu Mingyan, on the other hand, just let out a soft “ah.”
She said seriously, “So that’s how it was.”"
RL cackling Liu Mingyan you star you saving grace of the Liu family
- SQQ: it's ridiculous, bc who wouldn't happily sleep with Binghe? no one on earth, that's who. ...what? WHAT? I mean even As A Straight Man, I can see that--WHY ARE YOU BOOING ME?!?
- "As the tumbled around, locked in combat, the loose clothes on that body slipped completely down to its waist, and Luo Binghe’s palm directly pressed against that fair skin. With bloodshot eyes, Liu Qingge said, “Beast, no matter what he’s still your Shizun!”
Luo Binghe calmly said, “You think I’d do this with an outsider?”"
Ahahahah he's the worsttttt
- The pacing of 50 is still WILD fast, and I'm not sure whether it's a translation issue or what. This could stand to breathe more.