- 'Shen Qingiu’s worldview that had already been set for the past twenty-plus years' this is interesting, bc he's spent like 11 years here (3 teaching Binghe, 3 Abyss/Huan Huan period, 5 body maturing), so '20 plus' rather than '30 plus' puts his death pre-20?
arguably, he's not counting the maturation period--how conscious was he during that, if at all? And the book ran over 4 years, and was done when he died. Did he START reading this at like 15?
- Whelp I’ve reached the end of this whole first partial translation, and with it, the embarrassing ballad, which is the height of comedy
- Can’t believe he RAN to a brothel to try and fuck the gay away (his pretexts are such shit—what reputation protection, ppl already thought you went to brothels??), only to get ballad blocked
- 30 year old gay virgin, this walk in closet of a man
- yeah that worm was indeed Binghe's fucked-face cousin, who has since unfucked his face. Still not sure how he knows this is SQQ in a different body, but ok.
- 'Who wrote this ballad? What mountain was Chunshan referring to?
Qing Jing Peak?
Cang Qiong Mountain?
The Cang Qiong Mountain sect can wipe out your entire family, okay?!'
tfw you were not prepared for the explicit filk
- omfg this brothel snake plot is so good?? bc people don't pay attention to servants/girls/prostitutes. what a champ.
- "A sharp hiss came from the enormous snake’s mouth, and it shook its head and thrashed its tail in the street. Shen Qingqiu decided to draw him away from places where there were a lot of people, and he quickly leaped lightly onto its head. As long as the snake went in the wrong direction or was about to crash into pedestrians or houses, Shen Qingqiu would jab the fan into the side of its head. The snake’s scales were like armor, creating an enormous rumbling noise as it crawled along the floor. Shen Qingqiu often had to pour large amounts of spiritual energy into the fan to make it change direction, and so he forcefully drove the snake outside of the town."
you say you're not gay but then you spend the afternoon riding the big snake's head in public w h a t i s t h e t r u t h
- I never see Qi Qingqi in fic and it's a fucking shame because she is GREAT. qi qingqi came from fucking Meishan, where the bitch factory is, and I love that for her.
- Binghe's ENTIRE 'get shizun back' plan is based on believing SQQ will get away from his captor, suspect/hear the peak is getting fucked, RUN back and intervene. every step is based on SQQ being v proactive: his agency is key, &he constantly downplays it
- 'Liu Qingge said: “You’re afraid of being a burden on Cang Qiong Mountain sect but Cang Qiong Mountain sect isn’t necessarily afraid of this burden.”
Luo Binghe sneered: “How many unbroken ribs do you have left?”'
THIS CUNT
- "Shang Qinghua started. “You really have some good eyes, truly a faithful reader of mine. I’ll tell you, originally, I planned on unfolding the framework of the plot to set Bing-ge’s dad as the BOSS, but as I was writing, my computer died and I lost my outline, and a ton of the details were lost. And at the time the reviews section all wanted a different plotline, the battle of Bing-ge invading a hundred flowers, you understand. A whole hundred sacred flower spirits who had never seen a man since birth, and he dealt with all of them. Cucumber bro, you know how much I suffered to write the hundred flower buds blooming in concert section, but you still roast me…”"
...all this from poor back-up habits.
- I love that any time SQQ does anything cool like the sword hold Binghe is just fucking jazzed like 'yes, threaten my life baby, VERY hot--'
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Re: Chapters 51-55
Date: 2021-02-06 01:47 am (UTC)arguably, he's not counting the maturation period--how conscious was he during that, if at all? And the book ran over 4 years, and was done when he died. Did he START reading this at like 15?
- Whelp I’ve reached the end of this whole first partial translation, and with it, the embarrassing ballad, which is the height of comedy
- Can’t believe he RAN to a brothel to try and fuck the gay away (his pretexts are such shit—what reputation protection, ppl already thought you went to brothels??), only to get ballad blocked
- 30 year old gay virgin, this walk in closet of a man
- yeah that worm was indeed Binghe's fucked-face cousin, who has since unfucked his face. Still not sure how he knows this is SQQ in a different body, but ok.
- 'Who wrote this ballad? What mountain was Chunshan referring to?
Qing Jing Peak?
Cang Qiong Mountain?
The Cang Qiong Mountain sect can wipe out your entire family, okay?!'
tfw you were not prepared for the explicit filk
- omfg this brothel snake plot is so good?? bc people don't pay attention to servants/girls/prostitutes. what a champ.
- "A sharp hiss came from the enormous snake’s mouth, and it shook its head and thrashed its tail in the street. Shen Qingqiu decided to draw him away from places where there were a lot of people, and he quickly leaped lightly onto its head. As long as the snake went in the wrong direction or was about to crash into pedestrians or houses, Shen Qingqiu would jab the fan into the side of its head. The snake’s scales were like armor, creating an enormous rumbling noise as it crawled along the floor. Shen Qingqiu often had to pour large amounts of spiritual energy into the fan to make it change direction, and so he forcefully drove the snake outside of the town."
you say you're not gay but then you spend the afternoon riding the big snake's head in public w h a t i s t h e t r u t h
- I never see Qi Qingqi in fic and it's a fucking shame because she is GREAT. qi qingqi came from fucking Meishan, where the bitch factory is, and I love that for her.
- Binghe's ENTIRE 'get shizun back' plan is based on believing SQQ will get away from his captor, suspect/hear the peak is getting fucked, RUN back and intervene. every step is based on SQQ being v proactive: his agency is key, &he constantly downplays it
- 'Liu Qingge said: “You’re afraid of being a burden on Cang Qiong Mountain sect but Cang Qiong Mountain sect isn’t necessarily afraid of this burden.”
Luo Binghe sneered: “How many unbroken ribs do you have left?”'
THIS CUNT
- "Shang Qinghua started. “You really have some good eyes, truly a faithful reader of mine. I’ll tell you, originally, I planned on unfolding the framework of the plot to set Bing-ge’s dad as the BOSS, but as I was writing, my computer died and I lost my outline, and a ton of the details were lost. And at the time the reviews section all wanted a different plotline, the battle of Bing-ge invading a hundred flowers, you understand. A whole hundred sacred flower spirits who had never seen a man since birth, and he dealt with all of them. Cucumber bro, you know how much I suffered to write the hundred flower buds blooming in concert section, but you still roast me…”"
...all this from poor back-up habits.
- I love that any time SQQ does anything cool like the sword hold Binghe is just fucking jazzed like 'yes, threaten my life baby, VERY hot--'