Re: 186. 白駒 - Bai Ju

Date: 2021-04-12 04:03 am (UTC)
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'Be on your guard against idly wandering;
Deal vigorously with your thoughts of retirement.'

So what's this couplet about? Is it even right to say couplet, like is that a thing?

The last line flows a bit awkwardly out of a more easily intelligible stanza.

I think this may be the most competent chapter of minor odes thus far.
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