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"Rapid was the warlike energy" this doesn't QUITE work

"Till the country was reduced under complete restraint:" subdued?

"Tang the Successful" what a name

"But where their capitals had been assigned within the sphere of the labours of Yu," slightly confusing

"When Heaven by its will is inspecting [the kingdom],
The lower people are to be feared." ?

"He dared not to allow himself in indolence" awkwardly phrased

This last stanza very reminiscent of an earlier poem in this section, that opens and closes with the temple
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