Nineteen Ways of Looking at Wang Wei, Week 2 of 2

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This week, we're finishing Eliot Weinberger's "Nineteen Ways of Looking at Wang Wei". This short book discusses many ways to translate a single, brief Tang dynasty poem and the choices involved therein. This week, we'll look at the last ten poems. 

I'll reproduce the translations under discussion here, but c/ping from the pdf is not very reliable and frequently introduces errors. I'm including the text here primarily as a reference point for our discussions: I advise you to look at the book file itself for your reading.

Comments

Re: 13. Deer Enclosure

[superborb]

I kinda like "reaches into", but despite his poor phrasing of the crit, I agree with Weinberger that this isn't as pleasant sounding a poem.